User:Samarahzeinou/Self-handicapping/Ashleyphill Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Samarahzeinou


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Samarahzeinou/Self-handicapping
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Self-handicapping

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your edit looks good so far, but relatively incomplete. I'm not sure where your edit fits into the article. Maybe the findings? Your bibliography page is the most complete I've seen, so maybe go back and see what from those articles could be used to fill in some gaps from the article!

Peer review response

Hey there, I can't argue with your feedback whatsoever. I did some of the legwork by finding the articles and have even more now. I just need to take the time to write out my ideas gathered from my references and organize them in a thoughtful way. Thank you so much for your help!