User:Samarahzeinou/Self-handicapping/Whit873M Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Samarahzeinou


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Samarahzeinou/Self-handicapping?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Self-handicapping

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think a good idea when referring to outside studies would be to name the authors and provide a citation instead of referring to them as "they". I like the fact that you decided to implement your own new section of the overall article instead of just contributing to one itself. However, I think you could find better sources.

Peer review response

I am going to go back and name the authors and provide the citations instead of referring to them as they, I see how confusing it is to read. I have found some better sources and will be using the new thoughts and ideas gathered in order to add to, begin, and strengthen my article. Thank you so much for your feedback!