User:Samath1a/Chunking (psychology)/SethBruder Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Samath1a


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Samath1a/Chunking_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chunking (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like that your addition goes straight into modality. However, it could use a bit more of an explanation of what modality explicitly means on its own, and then in context with chunking. The statement "As stated above, the grouping of the responses occurs as individuals place them into categories according to their inter-relatedness based on semantic and perceptual properties." feels like a bit of a mouthful and sounds awkward; rewording it to "As stated above, individuals tend to group their responses by their semantic and perceptual inter-relatedness" may be an option. However, I may be misinterpreting this sentence, which means that elaboration on this point may be beneficial anyway. There are currently two sources in this section you are creating -- finding a few additional sources on this modality effect in chunking could strengthen your edits. Otherwise, good job overall, I would just suggest to continue expansion of your research.