User:Samayfield/Developmental toxicity/AsavariS Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Samayfield)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Samayfield/Developmental_toxicity/AsavariS_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Developmental toxicity

Evaluate the drafted changes
(I think the Lead could do a better job of describing the article's major sections, but it is very concise and well-written overall. The reader can understand the topic of the Wikipedia page without any kind of confusion, as its purpose is apparent. One thing that the Lead includes is the dicsussion of embryogenesis in humans. All the information is up to date and organized well. The article has a good flow, and there is no information which could be deemed irrelevant. I do not believe this article represents underrepresented populations, as it is primarily research based. It looks like one source has been utilized, so I would recomend drawing from more. This helps prevent bias in the article. However, the one source utilized was legititimate and through in its explanation of developmental toxicology. There is no media utilized, but it can be added later or as per needed. The content added has improved the quaility of the article. There are some mechanical and gramatical errors, but after the article is completed, it was be a very good resource to readers!)