User:Samayfield/Developmental toxicity/Najjar123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Article// Samayfield


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * N/A


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Developmental toxicity

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead of the article effectively defines what the topic is and talks gives small descriptions of each of the subtopics of the main topic, developmental toxicity, that are talked about in the article.

Content:

The content of the article is put together very well and each subtopic directly relates to the main topic in an easy way to read and follow.

Tone and Balance:

The tone of the article is very neutral with no biases of any sort.

Sources and References:

Sources are referenced throughout the article when needed. However one sections titled, "Testing and Risk Assessment," did not include a reference.

Organization:

The article is organized in a way that represents all of the points about developmental toxicity mentioned in the lead into sections covering each of these points/subtopics and it also explains the concepts affectively with no unnecessary extensions.

Images and Media:

The images used in the article complement the topic and are used in a way to reflect on what is being said visually for a more in depth understanding. An example includes the image next to the toxin DES.