User:Sameeharashid/Climate Change and Gender/Tyoudon11 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * Skyyron
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:Skyyron/sandbox

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Adds another source in relation to climate change and gender
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Source used is current from a UNFPA report released in 2009
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * Relevant content is listed

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * Yes, added content improves the overall quality of the article.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The example given by the UNFPA and cited quotes that support/ relate to climate change and gender
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * Can further elaborate as to how women "become ooppressed by their corporate counterparts" and possible examples.