User:SammiOv/sandbox

SA 26

History
The Dierberg family owns this 21-unit chain of store, and it roots back to 150 years ago. Back then, this store was called, "The 14 Mile House," which was located in Creve Couer, Missouri. The Dierberg family got this store from H.M Koch in 1914. SA 25

1. What stub did you choose? Why did you choose this one? Copy and past the URL link into your Sandbox

Immersion therapy - Wikipedia I chose this stub because I was interested in the mental health stubs, and this was a stub based on a type of therapy that is used to treat phobias, and anything that has to do with mental health/therapy interests me.

2. How do you know that it's a stub: Identify where on the page that you know that this is a stub

I know that it is a stub because I found it on the list of stubs that was provided after going through a couple clicks, I clicked mental health, then psychology, then got to this stub. At the top it shows that the stub needs additional citations for verification and is flagged for it.

3. What are some missing or under-developed parts of this stub? A good way to determine this is to compare your stub to a more developed article on the same topic and category. So for example, if you chose a stub-article on a horror novel, look for another Wikipedia article on another horror novel that is more fully developed. What is missing on your stub page in comparison? You should devote 4-5 sentences to answering this question.

A more developed article that I found was on light therapy, Light therapy - Wikipedia, and in this article it gives way more references (that actually work) and gives much more detail. It talks about the different medical uses of it, risks and complications, and gives history on it, which is always good to see in my opinion. This article gave way more detail where the stub only gave small detail on what immersion therapy was, and really did not explain it all that well to me. The stub is missing history and risks, which is so important if someone were reading about this and wanting to get it done. It talked about what happens during immersion therapy, but that is it, and did not give as much information as the light therapy article did.

4. In particular, locate the "References" section of the stub. What, if anything, is listed in the references? If the references are hyperlinked, do the links still work?

Lamson, Ralph. "Patent for Virtual Reality based Immersion Therapy". U.S. Patent Office. This is the link that was given for the references, and when I clicked on the link, it said "Google 404. That's an error. That's all we know."

5. And, when you compare this stub to a well developed article of the same category type, what sections of the overall article are present, and what are missing?

In the stub is has no categories and no references, since the one it did had did not work, whereas the more developed article had many categories and much more detail.

From Dr. Hildebrandt: Nice job on this Sammi. This could be your article to edit. Btw, I didn't see your work for SA #24 in Wikipedia. Did you have any problems with that?