User:Sammitchelleditor/sandbox

The article for Alexander Morris is the article I will be adding to.

The aspects of his life I am wanting to contribute are:

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My sources are as followed

- http://web.a.ebscohost.com.cat1.lib.trentu.ca:8080/ehost/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?vid=5&sid=38f0c938-430f-45d7-9514-b927d3e0c71e%40sessionmgr4006

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Peer Review

I looked at the original article and here are a few things I was thinking as I was looking at it:

I find that the structure of the article is very distracting and hard to understand. It might be better if his life was separated by sub-sections. Its written more like an essay than a Wiki-article but hold a Wiki undertone. There are lots missing on his political position, what was his position politically? What was his position on uniting Canada/Constitution? All the links looked good and relevant. They are relevant and scholarly sources. I think there might be some missing sources,

Peer Review After closely reading this article I found it very hard to read and not very organized. As a regular Wikipedia page, it is usually broken down into sub topics. This article could be broken down into topics such as Early Life, Political Achievements / Accomplishments, Later Life. There are many strong links attached throughout the article but there is a lack of sources. You may want to consider a longer and more in depth lead on the article. THere is a lot of information already on the page which is great! With a but more organization it should turn out great!