User:Sammwise39%/Education in India/Afernandes1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sammwise39%


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sammwise39%/Education_in_India?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Education in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is relevant to the topic and up to date with current sources that are accessible. The content added is written in a neutral voice. I think that the last sentence might seem more like a value judgement because of the use of the word "unproductive." Maybe find a way to reword that and relate it more directly to the study. There could be a wider diversity of sources used, since there are only two citations.The content is well written and does not contain grammatical errors aside from possibly some extra commas in the third sentence.