User:Sammwise39%/Education in India/Wikigupta713 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sammwise39%


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Education in India Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Education in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Feedback: I feel like there's one good statistic in there, but the new information could be interpreted in a way that could seem like it's biased. I think that the information about unproductive activities is really good, but maybe could be qualified with evidence or some statistic from the source itself. Otherwise, I think this is very well written and think that the information included is extremely relevant to the article at hand :)