User:Sammy.silich/Anti-communism/Gmd114 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sammy.silich, Auggie456, KarlosMarquitos, Totoama


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sammy.silich/Anti-communism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anti-communism

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am not sure of the sources used in this article, not sure if there is just one source that was used as there is only one cited.

The article is well-developed, and organized which makes it easy to read. I also like how you guys included multiple internal links - it is great for referencing.

There are barely any grammar or spelling errors, I found one where it reads, "The Hatch Act of 1939, which was sponsored by Carl Hatch of New Mexico, attempted to drive Communism out of public work places." I would change the word 'work places' to 'workplaces', as it is one word. Another sentence written later on reads, "Ideological restrictions on naturalization in United States law remain in effect, affecting prospective immigrants who were at one time members of a Communist party and the Communist Control Act." I would capitalize 'p' in Party, and add a comma after the word Party. This error was also found later on where you say, "Minneapolis, Chicago and Grand Rapids" I would add a comma after Chicago.

Overall, this section provided makes a significant contribution to the original article. Very informative to read.