User:SammyGatenby/The Year of the Flood/Bfoley51 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SammyGatenby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SammyGatenby/The_Year_of_the_Flood?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Year of the Flood

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Additions made to the lead are concise and specific, rounding out the current lead very well. The changes made to the characters section, specifically the distinction made between major and minor characters, is a great improve on the character section of the current article. The addition of the themes section as well as the section on the MaddAddam trilogy appear to be well-sourced, and provide more depth for the current article. Overall, very well organized, with specific, concise additions that help round out the current article.