User:SammyGatenby/The Year of the Flood/Oliviaabad Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SammyGatenby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:SammyGatenby/The Year of the Flood


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Year of the Flood

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

lead

The lead looks good, I would just add more to reflect the info you added, in particular the character lists and themes. Other than that, it looks good

Content

Content looks great to me.

Tone and balance

The content added is neutral.

Sources and references

References all look good to me

organization

Article is well organized, clear and easy to read.

images and media

no images/media.