User:Sammy bader/Sustainable product development/Ftkartoon Peer Review

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I'm reviewing Sammy Baders work.
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Sustainable product development:Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)
The beginning looks good but I just think you should add a little more about its origin and how it will effect the environment. Your additions are a little vague but I think with added in research you'll be able to get a more defined paragraph with better understanding.