User:Sammybeann/Kyle Allen (actor)/Gearhasm Peer Review

General info
Sammybean
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sammybeann/Kyle Allen (actor)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Kyle Allen (actor)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would change the first sentence: "Kyle Allen is currently 29 years old, as he was born October 10, 1994 in Livermore California." to where it did not say the age he is currently. This will require an edit every year when his age changes. I feel that the original article's statement just using his date of birth was sufficient and didn't need editing. I also was unable to find a link/citation to the information found and would think that would be a good addition to the titles that he and his sister have earned. However, the rest of the edit to the article seems relevant, important, and appropriately placed.