User:Samssaga/Sailor Jerry/LHpedia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Samssaga


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Samssaga/Sailor_Jerry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sailor Jerry

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft mentions a few key-point notes that are valuable information to the article. These would be great to be added to the article, if not already added. There were no fully drafted changes in the sandbox, so some completely new information could be drafted to add to the current article if not done so already. (Full sentences article-worthy, instead of just notes.

A new reference link was added, which is good for updating the article's credibility. Because the current article is already fairly filled out, I believe finding only one new reference is a sufficient addition.

Overall, I think that some of the notes taken from the reference link could be made into full sentences, so that they could be added to the article, if not already. However, the notes provided good information, and the link provided appeared credible.