User:Samtasstic/Mãe Gilda de Ogum/Jcookie7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sam Carter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * No draft on wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The last sentence is not a full sentence. AKA not translated from portuguese to english correctly. Otherwise, I think the article is very good. It doesn't stray from the chosen topic and it appears to remain neutral. Obviously it is missing citations, but I am assuming that you have them ready and that they are just not included in the word document. If this is a translation then this next comment will not apply. If not, it would be cool to hear a little more about her life before she died from being bullied by the Igreja Universal