User:Samthebossbabe/Child sexual abuse/Jillianmm31 Peer Review

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Samantha (Samthebossbabe)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Samthebossbabe/Child sexual abuse
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Child sexual abuse

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For the "Lead" section, I like how you included the concluding sentence focusing on how child sexual abuse forms are a result of the "pernicious crime perpetrated through threats of violence, intimidation, manipulation, and abuse of power." It helps with the flow of the lead of "Child Sexual Abuse." In addition, the source "H.R.2920 - Statutes of Limitation for Child Sexual Abuse Reform Act" from last year is credible and not biased (just make sure to add the source to the references section), which is great!

Nice work adding "sextortion" to the list of types of child sexual abuse prevalent today. What is the source that you found to define "sextortion" from? I would make sure to include this before your final revision to the "Child Sexual Abuse" article.

Here are some other things that I would look into editing in the rest of the article (if you want to):


 * In the "Offenders" section under "Other Children," I may reword it to connect its overall subheading to "Other Children Offenders."
 * With the "Effects" section, there are the subheadings under "Physical:" "Injury," and "Infections." These seem too brief in the article. I think they need more information, but up to you!
 * Most sources were published in the 1980s, 1990s, 2000s, and 2010s. I did notice one of the citations showed a source from 2020, but otherwise, the 2020s are absent from the article as a whole. I think it would be good to include more recent statistics related to child sexual abuse.
 * For example, the "Global" section under the "Prevalence" heading shows the self-disclosed abuse for girls and boys from 2011. I wonder if there may be more recent statistics...
 * This could be applied throughout the entire Wikipedia article.
 * Under "Prevalence," there is a sub-heading on the United States and Europe. I feel like it may be good to separate these two personally.
 * When it comes to the last section on "Civil Lawsuits," I think it may be interesting to include the case of Jeffrey Epstein. Some of his youngest victims were underage, and it shows a more recent example of a civil lawsuit and legal case on sexual assault against children.
 * I know the legal system is incorporated throughout "Child Sexual Abuse," but I feel like a section describing how the United States on the federal/local level has dealt and dealt with pedophiles. This issue is so connected to law, morality, and society, so it may be something to think about...

I look forward to seeing your revisions on the article!

-Jillian