User:Samthebossbabe/Child sexual abuse/Mundozurdo Peer Review

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Samthebossbabe
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 * User:Samthebossbabe/Child sexual abuse
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 * Child sexual abuse

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Sam :)

I think your addition of sextortion to the types of abuse is quite important especially given the recent resurgence of a focus on digital forms of exploitation and abuse - are you considering bringing up any discussion of the current political discussion/action occuring? I also really like your expansion of the lead section especially as you emphasize the mechanisms by which it occurs - do you plan on adding more analysis of the power at play, i.e. a feminist critique of masculinity, patriarchy, capitalism vis-à-vis trafficking, etc.? It would be a lot to add but might be worth exploring.

Given what's at stake, you've done an excellent job of keeping your additions in neutral language and I'm excited to see where you take it - let me know if you'd like me to take a look later on in the semester!