User:Samtswisher/Leptasterias/CharlieJ385 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

samtswisher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * samtswisher/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Leptasterias

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

A lead needs to be included. It needs to be different from the original article's first sentence. A brief description of the article's sections should be included.

Content

Fairly sufficient, could add sections for anatomy/description, distribution, reproduction, etc. Could add a few images. Minor grammar errors.

Tone

Solid tone, a neutral view is used well.

Sources

No sources were included.

Overall

I think this is a solid rough draft. I would recommend including sections to make the article appear more organized. Most importantly, I would also include all of the sources used.