User:Samtswisher/Leptasterias/Radavis12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

samtswisher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Leptasterias (couldn't find sandbox draft)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Leptasterias

Evaluate the drafted changes
I could not find a draft in the user's sandbox, and I am unsure if it has been edited, so I am going to go off of the current article. The lead is a good start. It is brief and touches on some main aspects of the genus. I think the last sentence is a little too specific. I think it could be moved to a different section based on the genus' reproduction modes, etc. The list of species is good. If that is from previous editors, I recommend that you do a bit of research to see if anymore species have been described. I would be sure to add a section about the genus' description and characteristics, as well as one for feeding and/or habitat/distribution. Good luck!