User:San Andreas666

Hi San Andreas666.

I've been reading your contributions to the FF6 page, and generally they're quite good. I do have one suggestion to make: Try to avoid the "walkthrough-like" details in your writing. The basic idea is to capture the broad significance the locations have to the main plot and the characters. The fact that there are no save points in the Fanatics Tower or that in Cyan's dream the Phantom Forest contains "new puzzles" and more "powerful monsters" are unnecessary.

Best, Bluesuede.