User:Sanders.b.d/Digital journalism/MizuAzul Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sanders.b.d.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Couldn't find. Does not exist or was in another sandbox.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Digital journalism

Evaluate the drafted changes
I could not locate the sandbox draft for this article. Below are some suggestions for improving the current article on Wikipedia. If your article is in a different location, please let me know.

This article is very long and may have excessive depth of information in some subsections. Consider editing part of the article to be more concise.

Article has several instances where the author makes vague claims. Editing for a more professional tone would improve the article.

"Some have asserted that..."

"It has been acknowledged that..."

"The repurposing of print content for an online audience is sufficient for some, while others require content created with the digital medium's unique features like hypertextuality."

Several of the references for claims in the articles link to opinions of blog publishers. There are also a number of broken links. Improving sources for claims would also improve this article.