User:Sandrinelessardaubin/Louis Comfort Tiffany/Muhizi Karema Peer Review

General info
Hailey Fortune, Maarg0ot, Ambre.simonin
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Louis_Comfort_Tiffany

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The lead is short and precise and the general layout of the article is elegant. Pictures are strategically placed to support the information provided and give an idea of key concepts. All information provided are relevant and they are supported by strong sources, namely reputable magazines and museums. The title "Oeuvre" however seems grammatically wrong considering that it was not only one piece that he made or that is presented. A minimal error though in my opinion as most of the article is grammatically correct.