User:Sandro1324/Rainwater harvesting/Julesbarr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sandra1324


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sandro1324/Rainwater_harvesting?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rainwater harvesting

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked the sentences that you added that contribute to this subsection on domestic use of rainwater. I like that your contribution actually adds more detail to this topic and gives the reader a better understanding of the specific ways in which rainwater is used differently. I think you should make a bigger list of what non-potable rainwater is used for, instead of just keeping it at "etc.". I also noticed a spelling mistake with "sites" on the second-to-last sentence (should be "site's"). Good job so far.