User:Sandro1324/Rainwater harvesting/Mattalee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kira Clapp


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sandro1324/Rainwater_harvesting?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rainwater harvesting

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content
I like the inclusion of a distinction between uses for potable and non-potable water collection as it clarifies the fact that collected rainwater is not always pure. For the section about non-potable usage, the sentence structure could be made more clear. Non-potable itself implies water that is unsafe to drink, thus the clarification at the end about usage not requiring purification is redundant. Perhaps you could switch the order, explaining how one can reduce costs for municipal water by directly using collected water without purification. Then you could note that purification does increase costs of and requires installation for rainwater usage, but this is offset by lowered total water bill. I do like the note about dependance on city codes.