User:Sandro1324/Rainwater harvesting/SJLupine Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sandro1324


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sandro1324/Rainwater_harvesting?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rainwater harvesting

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that what you have so far is on the right track! it is informative and has a neutral tone/perspective. I do think that you should add a citation or two in the second paragraph of your "my edits" though just to make sure things are clear.

If you have any stats on how non potable rain water can lower costs I think that would be cool to include. or a ball park number or percent saved.