User:Sandyo'brien/Theo James/Baileybear1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sandyo'brien


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sandyo'brien/Theo_James?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Theo James

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like your paragraph about the Divergent movie. It is such a big one that he was in and so I think it's great that you made a whole paragraph about it. I also really like your edits on the chart. It is so much better and more organized. I think that you could add some information about him being in the trending show "the white lotus." Since that show has been really popular in the past few years I think it could make readers engage more on a show that is trending right now still. I think if you wanted to add a little bit more information you can add some information about how he became this well known actor. I really like how much you've updated the article, it sounds really good and so much better with all of your new information.