User:Sandyseac/Peggy Papp/BlueSkies18 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Your lead is awesome!

Content

Your content is clear, well-organized, and relevant. Great job!

Early Life and Education

"Her parents were Mormon homesteaders and Papp spent most of her childhood in Manila, UT on her their ranch".

Majors don't have to be capitalized unless they are a proper noun (such as English)

Work and Publications

"Her work focused on how women and men cope with depression differently, and how taking care of a depressed spouse differs depending on who it is". - This seems a little unclear

Tone and Balance

Your writing was neutral and enjoyable to read.

Sources and References

Nice job with the references