User:Sandyseac/Peggy Papp/Ez2055 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * SandySeac


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Early and life education: last sentence of first paragraph 'UT on her their ranch" Is it her ranch or their ranch? Can you site/link Hunter College?

Theater section: Change Papp to Papp's

Personal LIfe: You can link new york (I think)

Overall your flow was very good, it was easy to read and straight to the point. I also checked all of your links and they worked great. You had a lot of great information about Peggy Papp and did a great job of keeping the information simple and concise.