User:Sangnc/sandbox

carbon nanohorn 1.The title fit well to be a topic for wiki.They linked most related sites, but some other words may be linked are polysaccharide and hydrophilicity. 2.The introduction part is do capture the main idea of the topic such as history, structure and some applications. 3.The background do explain the reason of why bacterial cellulose is important and the topic can be placed in materials science area. 4.The outline is in a logical order. 5.They may add some product made by bacterial cellulose such as artifical skin mentioned in the text. 6.The firt two references are the same, and the total number of review articles in 1998 is about 5, so it covered most of the important reviews. 7.The first paragraph can be ajust as follows: Microbial, or bacterial, cellulose is a specific type of cellulose, which differs from natural plant cellulose. It is produced by certian types of bacteria, principally of the genera Acetobacter, Sarcina (genus) and Agro bacterium,which form proective envelopes around the cells. Bacterial cellulose is characterized by its high purity, strength, and increased water holding ability over plant cellulose, but it is low efficent for industry producation. Many methods are currently being investigated to artificially synthesize microbial cellulose,and several studies are also being conducted to determine the structure and properties of microbial cellulose. By controlling synthesis methods, the resulting microbial cellulose can be tailored to have specific desirable properties. For example, attention has been given to the bacteria Acetobacter xylinum due to its cellulose’s unique mechanical properties and applications to biotechnology, microbiology, and Materials Science. This interest resulted in more than 50 patents and about 110 citations analysed from Derwent Biotechnology Abstracts for the period (1990-1996) directly after its discovery. [2] Historically, bacterial cellulose has been limited to the manufacture of Nata de coco, an indigenous food of South-East Asia.[3] With advances in the ability to synthesize and characterize bacterial cellulose, the material is being used for a wide variety of commercial applications including textiles, cosmetics, and food products, as well as medicine, and organic light emitting diodes (OLEDs). 1.The title fit well to be a topic for wiki.They linked most related sites, but some other words may be linked are polysaccharide and hydrophilicity. 2.The introduction part do capture the main idea of the topic, such as its history, structure and some applications. 3.The background do explain the reason of why bacterial cellulose is important and the topic can be placed in materials science area. 4.The outline is in a logical order. 5.They may add some figures of products made by bacterial cellulose such as artifical skin mentioned in the text. 6.The firt two references are the same, and the total number of review articles in 1998 is about 5, so it covered most of the important reviews. 7.The first few sentences of the first paragraph may be ajust as follows: Microbial, or bacterial, cellulose is a specific type of cellulose, which differs from natural plant cellulose. It is produced by certian types of bacteria, principally of the genera Acetobacter, Sarcina (genus) and Agro bacterium,which form proective envelopes around the cells. Bacterial cellulose is characterized by its high purity, strength, and increased water holding ability over plant cellulose, but it is low efficent for industry producation. Many methods are currently being investigated to artificially synthesize microbial cellulose,and several studies are also being conducted to determine the structure and properties of microbial cellulose.