User:Sansontm/be bold

Hello.

I need help with understanding this article's purpose. The article jumps all over the page starting with the very beginning. The article discusses how jack- o- lanterns are carved/made out of pumpkins or turnips. Then, it jumps down to the bottom of the page to discuss that jack- o- lanterns can be squashes as well. Maybe it is appropriate to say that jack- o - lanterns are most commonly pumpkins but can be the fruits or vegetables as well. The article also mentions a "How to" guide on carving a jack- o- lantern, which from Wikipedia's guidelines, is considered inappropriate to Wiki articles. Possibly that section could be its own separate article?

I read sections and comments of the talk page and other users actually agreed the same with me. There were more spelling errors and such pointed out that I probably missed, but those were the two main issues I found. The other users in the talk section also pointed out adding more information to the different sections of the article, such as in the Origin section. I think what wants to be shown more is the author's sources. Having more information, it seems, would help the article tremendously, according to other users.

--~ sansontm Being bold is important on Wikipedia.