User:Santana1998/Empowering Consumers for the Green Transition/Fbk10 Peer Review

General info
Santana 1998
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Santana1998/Empowering Consumers for the Green Transition
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Fbk10 Peer Review

- The lead is well composed. It chronologically introduces the important components of the legislation in a way that is easy to understand. One small change that could enhance the article is changing the wording when re-stating the goals of the law. The phrases "empower consumers" and "contribute to the green transition" are both used twice.

- Maybe add some mention of the 2005/2011 pieces as stepping stones towards the Empowering Consumers for the Green Transition to the lead.

- I enjoy both the chronological structure of the body and the timeline section included under. The article is easier to follow this way.

- 2 sections in the body of the article seems like too few. Maybe a small section that talks about some of the people behind this legislation and the societal motivators for proposing this legislation would be interesting and relevant to add. Events that influenced the proposal of this bill could also be added to the timeline to fill the large gap between 2011 when the Consumer Rights Law was published and 2022 when the proposal for the Empowering Consumers for the Green Transition was created.

- Would be interesting to hear about other EU initiatives to promote a green transition. Good that the "stepping stone" legislations that the Empowering Consumers for the Green Transition Bill were mentioned. But because these were not specifically designed to focus on green initiatives, I would like to know if there was any other articles that similarly pursue green initiatives that may have inspired this bill.

- Sources look great. Use of official EU documents is a good way to avoid bias.

- Overall, the info in this article and the sources are all solid. Would be interesting to see the body divided into more subsections.