User:SantanaG123/Academia Mayor de la Lengua Quechua/Treedovey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Santana


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SantanaG123/Academia_Mayor_de_la_Lengua_Quechua?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Academia Mayor de la Lengua Quechua

Evaluate the drafted changes
a. Hi Santana! Overall everything looks really good and thorough! I feel like you have good sources and your article is cohesive and pretty easy to understand. Overall you seem to be in great shape with having a lot of information and translating most of what already exists. I think that you've really kept the integrity of the original article in tact while translating and also think that the formatting you've followed helped the article to flow and be easy to read.

b.


 * 1) I believe there are some parts of the translation that are missing from the Spanish article. Mainly the problems and critiques portion of the article. I believe that section may be useful information and sort of provides a timeline and important dates of organizational problems.
 * 2) I can see that the Spanish portion of the article has a large amount of sources. I am mostly wondering if we should retrieve those sources and apply them to the English article as well? Even though it is a translation, the same sources should be checked for information and are still used in the English version of the article. This is something I plan on asking the professor but, if that is the case, then I think many references in the original article could be used your version.
 * 3) There are some areas of the article that are a little difficult to read with your word choices. The section on the Quechua World Congress was a little confusing with the world "promulgating" alongside so many technical terms like phytonyms, zoonyms, anthroponyms, etc. While these terms are obscure,  I thought back on Elias' lesson on finding the right word for a concept even if it has a 'proper' definition. I am just wondering if these terms have more known definitions or another word choice that could be used.
 * 4) I noticed that many terms in the article are linked to other Wiki articles on things like Cochabamba or the Linguistic Institute of Verano. I think another thing we should evaluate is whether or not we should be linking these terms in English, Spanish, or not at all. I think for words like Toponymy/toponimia, where there is an article in both English and Spanish for it, it may be useful to link these articles in order for the reader to understand what these words mean.
 * 5) There a couple words which, although in English, may still maintain their accents. For example, under higher academy the name David Samanez Flórez might maintain their accent in the last part of their name.