User:Sapattee/Asa Daklugie/ThatBoiNick Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I"m reviewing a wiki about Asa Daklugie and the wiki was made by Sapatte.


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 * User:Sapattee/Asa Daklugie


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Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, this wiki about Asa Daklugie is pretty good, knowing when he was born in what year and what tribe he was part of really helps. Even though information on his family is little the information was good in telling who Asa Daklugie married and how many children he had and what their names are.

I don't know much about this Indigenous man, even when I was researching for my wiki page I didn't find any information about Asa Daklugie. Never the less, what was presented so far is really good information for someone I didn't know and when no wiki has been made about that man. I would suggest to use google scholar to find more information about Asa Daklugie. Try to also add more to your introduction, just add general information like what he did his life, when he was born and when he died as well, and then maybe state when he was married

If you can, tried to add some pictures as well. People need at least a baseline look of how Asa Daklugie looks and, if possible, pictures of others in his life like his wife. That's all I have to say since I don't have much info myself about Asa Daklugie but so far you are doing pretty good. Just need to add some more info on the introduction and maybe see if this person has more personal history or involvement in other events.