User:Sappho Cornelia Catula/Clodia Pulchra (wife of Metellus)/Berriesblue Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Sappho Cornelia Catula
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Sappho Cornelia Catula/Clodia Pulchra (wife of Metellus)

Lead
I liked that you left most of the lead the same, I think it does a great job explaining the information. I did like how you changed the wording of the last sentence the connecting words you added it made it much easier to read. That being said, I think a little bit more background information could be useful.

Content
The content that you added seems that it is relevant to the topic. The additions you did make do a good job of adding to the overall content of the article. I think you could add more content if possible. Due to the specific nature of the content this might be impossible.

Tone and Balance
The words and content that you added did a great job of matching the existing tone of the article. It was impossible for me to determine what you added VS.existing content. The content was very balanced, I did not notice any bias to one side or the other.

Sources and References
The sources you added are current, the also seem to be from reputable sources. I think you could try to find some more peer reviewed sources this could help you find some more content to add. All of the links seem to work as well.

Organization
Overall I think the organization is fine, that being said more headings could be helpful.

Images and Media
I think you could add one more image, it would help this article stand out a little bit more. Maybe another picture of her, or a picture of her family or husband if possible.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
The grammatical edits you added did a great job of making the article more readable overall. The content you added did a good job of clarifying as well. I think you should focus on organization, and adding more media. Some more content could also be nice if possible.