User:Sara8887/Art therapy/Zclayt Peer Review

Lead portion of the sandbox had lots of information inserted and included, also within your article body of the sandbox it was very detailed and informative and included lots of great things about Art Therapy. I would not make any changes to the body of your sandbox. I would include just a bit more into the lead to give a heavier intro to the topic, but other than that minor suggestion I think that you did a really good job. I also think that you did a great job include multiple references in your work as well.

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