User:SaraForeman/sandbox

Hello everyone! I'm not quite the expert at this, but reading about sandboxes gave me the impression that this is where I should test my editing skills before going out into the real world and possibly making a fool of myself. I recommend checking out the cheatsheet page because it wraps up the editing manners quite nicely. - Sara

Follow Up
putting two equal signs before and after a phrase will make it into a subheading. Cool stuff!

11/21/13 Changed the heading on Emily Martin's page to "Writings" opposed to "Books", so that we may include her article on the Egg and the Sperm.

The Egg and the Sperm: How Science Has Constructed a Romance Based on Stereotypical Male-Female Roles
An article that Emily Martin wrote provides insight into how metaphors that are used to teach biological concepts reflect the social constructed "definitions of male and female." She focuses on fertilization and how

peer edit: Michaela Holland
 * Hi nice job on changing the heading. there are alot of ideas and section that can continue to be updated. First each of these books lack hyperlinks which are made by two brackets for words such as metaphor and sperm and egg these links help to concrete your facts by sedning the reader to their wiki page or another online site that explains your word deeper, its a great easy wa to reference material.
 * go in depth eg: Woman in Body Emily Martin ses field work.. what kind of field work? From when in her life?
 * in Labor speak of the different economic uterian and laissez faire and talk about how she drew on the historical aspect on these for the shift in culture
 * hyperlink your references at the bottom so people can easily check your work and check the book you are speaking of connected to Emily Martin