User:SaraParkwood/Creative Commons license/Alexdaviesmorris Peer Review

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Nice job Sana! I think your lead is not only concise but also provides a nice set up for the structure of your edits while still maintaining an encyclopedic voice. Same goes for the rest of your edits, I think that you explain how the different ideologies influence creative commons licenses very well. This is not much of a suggested edit and I'm not sure if its already included in the article you're editing, but if you can, you should definitely add more on the Info-Communist movement! Maybe it could become its own sub-section, but from what you already wrote about in your edits, it sounds really interesting.