User:Sarah3707/Lycophron/SwimBois Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Sarah3707)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sarah3707/Lycophron?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lycophron

Evaluate the drafted changes
This looks like a very good Wikipedia sandbox; from the two paragraphs I read, it seems like Sarah3707 understands what she will write about. I only have two critiques, the first being that I think Sarah needs to put in some citations in her sandbox, primarily in the first paragraph. Second, being that she needs to fix the design of the second paragraph so it could look more like a Wikipedia page. Otherwise, it was a good Wikipedia Sandbox.