User:Sarah Silberman/Paula Hyman/Actuallyrmk Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Sarah Silberman
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Sarah Silberman/Paula Hyman

Lead
The lead clearly and concisely describes the article's topic. It contains no information that is not present in the article, and gives a good overall summary of the article's major sections and points.

Lead evaluation
Excellent

Content
The content added is relevant to the topic, up-to-date, and there does not seem to be any information that is obviously missing or does not belong.

Content evaluation
Excellent

Tone and Balance
The content added is neutral, and there seem to be no viewpoints that are over or under-represented. It does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of or against any position. If there's any bias, it's towards the fact that Hyman was influential, which is why there is an article being written about her in the first place.

Tone and balance evaluation
Excellent

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

All new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information. The sources are thorough and current, and the links seem to work.

Sources and references evaluation
Excellent

Organization
Guiding questions:

The content added is very well-written - it is easy to read and makes sense. There are a few typos, mostly just double spacing, to watch out for. As far as overall organization goes, I would maybe make separate sections for Hyman's academic career and her advocacy for the ordination of Conservative rabbis - having everything in a timeline format makes these topics seem a little jumbled.

Organization evaluation
Good

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:

The added content has contributed to a high-quality and complete article. Paula Hyman's academic and advocacy work, as well as her lasting legacy, are clearly depicted.

Overall evaluation
Excellent