User:Sarahann715

Hi! I'm Sarah!

Thurston High School The Thurston High School page did a good job with most of its information, although, its sports and clubs only primarily focused on basketball, football, and band. I would like to edit the activities at Thurston High School, being since there is a lot more offered than what is said. I personally was on the Dance Team, which was well-known, and that is not listed at all. Cheerleading, volleyball, baseball, softball, and various clubs are also unlisted. There are many punctual mistakes that also need to be changed. 

Editing errors I found that should be changed: sighed (should be signed) Marching Band : is.. (should be Marching Band is..) Coach Starck, is actually spelled Stark The number 4 should be written out as four

Some other things I would change: The only notable Alumni is a Playboy playmate, which is kind of a tacky recognition. I think other people who would represent Thurston High School better should be noted. Also, the sentence "Darrell Hunter might be a 6th round draft pick in the MLB." should not be stated there, since it is not a fact, and has not happened yet, and might not. It is just an assumption that should not be on wikipedia.

4-H 4-h is an area of my expertise because I was a member of it growing up, for 8 years.my little sister nad Nephews are still a part of it currently, so I am up to date with current events. The 4-h page is very informative, and seems to be very complete to me. 

Walterville, Oregon I know just about all there is to know about this little town since it is where I have lived most my life. It is a tiny place, that many do not even know of. I worked at the only grocery store there during high school, so I know most of the locals and anything new and exciting that goes on. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walterville%2C_Or ]

Phoenix, Arizona This is where I was born, and much of my family lives in Phoenix. Here is a link to what is already on the Wikipedia site

Lane Community College This is where I went to school during my first year and a half of college. It's not very exciting, but I think I could add some information onto the wiki page because there isn't much there.