User:Sarahcm12/How to Slowly Kill Yourself and Others in America/Maddie beckley Peer Review

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(Sarahcm12)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:How To Slowly Kill Yourself and Others in America
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-Great lead!! Very informative, concised, and well written

-I think youre off to a great start with the reviews and you have found some great sources, they are all revelant to the topic.

-I'm sorry people keep deleting your edits

-You could add some summaries of the most notable essays and maybe some background of the author.

-I think youre off to a great start, especially since you had to start your page from scratch.

-The tone is kept neutral

-adding an awards section could also be something that you could add if there are any notable awards.

overall, great job and keep up the good work.