User:Sarahestrada/María de Jesús Patricio Martínez/Reyna2061 Peer Review

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Sarahestrada
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 * María de Jesús Patricio Martínez
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 * María de Jesús Patricio Martínez

Evaluate the drafted changes
Strong lead - it is concise and describes the major contributions of Martinez. The use of media is also helpful to put a face to the name of the activist. I would suggest going into a little more detail about Nahuan traditional indigenous medicine - just a sentence or two describing what it entails, and its significance to their community. I would also write just a little bit more about Carlos Gonzalez - is he an activist as well? Why is it important to highlight that Martinez is married to this person? It would be helpful to add more to Marichuy's work in 2001 and what exactly her role was in speaking before the Congress of the Union. What exactly was she advocating for? I think the use of quotations is very useful in humanizing Marichuy and showing how much she means to indigenous women, and highlighting her accomplishment of receiving an award was a good thing to note as well. The biggest update that can be added would be to the section of the Mexican presidency. It seems as though the last update added between 2017-18, so it would be beneficial and informative to add to this section by including new work that has been done.