User:Sarahhelennicholson/Women Who Kill/Mariana Madera Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sarahhelennicholson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sarahhelennicholson/Women Who Kill


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women Who Kill

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The lead is simple and easy to follow along with, because of the article's topic you don't need a lengthy lead so i think yours is fine. Most of the content is the plot which i saw you made some edits to and i found your version of the plot to be more concise and easier to read than the version that is up right now so i wanted to say great job on that part. The tone and balance is neutral, you just educate the reader on the movie but you are never saying in that it's the best/worst movie ever. There are reliable sources present when you are backing something up, i also realized you added a production section which i thought was a beneficial add to the article. For the images and media i noticed you took out the picture of the movie, was there a reason for this? or is there maybe another picture that fits better? i was just wondering what your thoughts were on that part. Overall i think you did a great job adding to this article especially the plot section, i think that made the article twice as strong as it was before.

Thank you so much! I think I messed up the formatting when copying the original article because I plan on keeping the image so thank you for reminding me.

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