User:Sarahlujoseph/Rabies virus/ExplorerRoxy Peer Review

General info
Sarahlujoseph
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sarahlujoseph/Rabies virus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Rabies virus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very clean draft. Super easy to understand and well written. You also kept a great neutral tone. I took a look at the article's original sections, and they could totally use the improvement. I think adding some links to words that some people may not be familiar with might help improve the draft. Ex. "Lagos Bat, Mokola, and Duvenhage viruses" could use a link to another wiki article. You may also want to check the incubation period because it goes against the original article that says days to months. (This is also found on the CDC website) My only other piece of advise would be to make sure your writings are not too similar to the article's writings. Some of the sentences only have a few words changed or stay in the same format. Your work is much more improved than others which made it hard to find anything terribly wrong with it. Continue to make some minor changes and keep searching for articles to back up your claims. Great work! <3