User:Sarahmoran683/Applied behavior analysis/Lmn23 Peer Review

General info
Sarahmoran682
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sarahmoran683/Applied behavior analysis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Applied behavior analysis

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead for this article does a good job at defining the topic. However, it could be more concise. There is some information in the lead that I think could go in the "History" section. There has not been much content added that I can see in the sandbox, but I think the user is on the right track with noticing sections that need proper citations! The tone of the article appears to be neutral. It discusses individuals with autism, which can sometimes be hard to discuss in an unbiased way given that there are many different views on the topic. However, I think the article does it in a very neutral way. There appears to be a solid, extensive list of sources with varying authors. There are a few older sources, but the majority appear to be up to date with links that work. The content of the article is fairly concise, and it is well-organized in appropriate sections. There is only one image, and I think there could be more information added to the caption. Another picture could potentially be added somewhere in the concepts section. Overall, I think this article does a good job at providing information on ABA, and I think the user's additions will make it even better!