User:Sarahnalbandian/Mursal Nabizada/MewMobile Peer Review

General info
Mursal Nabizada
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sarahnalbandian/Mursal Nabizada:Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mursal Nabizada

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good information added to the lead, it brings up the main subjects that are being brought up from her birth, her career, and death. Compared to the original article, the article now gives more detailed information of her work outside of Parliament and information that can be connected leading up to her death. I think the article does a good job in remaining a neutral, unbiased tone. I like the structure of the revised article over the original and think it is better organized. Perhaps consider adding citations to lead, but good mix of different sources. Overall, it is a great improvement to the original article.