User:Sarahsgoh/Raquel Sanchez/Dante0526 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Page for Rachel Sanchez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sarahsgoh/Raquel_Sanchez?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * does not exist as published

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is very easy to follow, it's clean and concise, giving the reader the exact information that they are looking for without having to search through irrelevant material. I really like that you have pictures added, I would love to have a picture of the individual themselves if you have it. And also, does Dr. Eric Holland have a wiki page, if they do, it would be awesome to link theirs to this page as well as Dr. Hootie Warren and Dr. Tom Uldrick that were mentioned in the page. I really like how you organized her career section, it was easy to follow along and understand the timeline for her work. Overall a very nice page, it seems that the first, fourth and sixth references are missing something so I would look into that (they're marked in red for me noting something is missing), but in general I really enjoyed your page and think it's very nicely done, I hope my feedback is helpful.