User:Sarahtatehahn/sandbox

Training Modules:

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Article Evaluation:
There is nothing in the article that is super distracting or out of place, but there is a citation missing and the biography could be improved. The tone is very neutral, and there isn't anything that is trying to persuade or show a certain view. The citations are reliable and come from unbiased sources, and everything is referenced except one fact. There aren't any discussions going on about the article, but it is part of two wikiprojsects: georgia and christianity.

Assigned Article: John Locke
One of the aspects of this article I am going to change is the life and works tab. I am going to separate out his early life and education so that they can be fully developed and have their own category, since they don't belong in works. I am also going to help the other editors with the 'influence' section so that it is not so overstuffed, and put it later on so that the flow of the article makes sense.

Evaluation
This article is written with a very neutral tone, and isn't persuading a certain point. All of the claims are backed up with citations that are real. One part of the article that Is underdeveloped to me is Locke's early life. The article barely touches upon it.

User:Anabelleb50/sandbox

Edits

 * Removing quotes and specific evidence since wikipedia doesn't allow that
 * Clarifying his religious beliefs and rewriting them in a way people understand
 * Adding more evidence to Locke's Philosophy
 * Locke, John. An Essay Concerning Human Understanding. W. Tegg, 1870.
 * Rogers, G. A. J. Locke's Philosophy: Content and Context. Clarendon Press, 2007.

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